unity and coherence

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The overall idea of Marius 's essay is that writing is hard work . The sentence in paragraph two is writing takes time - lots of time . It is difficult to devote time to any one thing , and writing is no exception , especially if a writer struggles with any facet of writing . Some don 't even know where to begin others have to wait for inspiration . Others only do it because they are forced to for a school assignment ! Anything without an immediate reward is difficult

br to do for most people , and if it requires time , it also requires sacrifice , which relates to the third paragraph 's sentence , most require some sort of solitude . Solitude is equivalent to starvation . It is giving up something that is essential to human existence - companionship . Friends and family sometimes do not understand the need for solitude and can become angry if someone dives into work and all of a sudden becomes unavailable to them . Most friends and family are supportive , but over time will grow tired of being overlooked for a piece of writing . The fourth paragraph focuses on the overall sacrifice that a writer must make in to work - time and solitude . Both are very difficult and require discipline . Here Marius also touches on the finer aspects of writing - thinking , considering points , testing , examination , and details , details , details ! Writing is work , even for those who are good at it or like it . It can be a chore or a beautiful exploration of life

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