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PARAGRAPH 1

The of the paragraph is : Protecting Your Computer . I believe that the author should have included information on ways by which people expose themselves to virus attacks I believe that palliative measures can also be used to prevent virus attacks . This is not stated in the paragraph . I believe that the author should have included information on ways by which people expose themselves to virus attacks I believe that palliative measures can also be used to prevent virus attacks . This is not stated in the paragraph . The point of view

of the author changed from that of information to advertisement . The author was doing a good job of giving information on how to protect your computer from viruses Abruptly , the author started advertising the various softwares Afterwards , the author switched back . In all , the paragraph was not cohesive because of this action . This paragraph Without the proper securities in place anyone can look into your computer and mess with your personal information ' to my knowledge is very explicit as it stated as a matter of fact that viruses wreck a havoc on computer systems . I believe that the author should have included information on ways by which people expose themselves to virus attacks I believe that palliative measures can also be used to prevent virus attacks . This is not stated in the paragraph . The point of view of the author changed from that of information to advertisement . The author was doing a good job of giving information on how to protect your computer from viruses Abruptly , the author started advertising the various softwares Afterwards , the author switched back . In all , the paragraph was not cohesive because of this action . I would say that in terms of effectiveness , the paragraph was satisfactory PARAGRAPH 2

In my opinion , the of the paragraph is - The failure of the No Child Left Behind (NCLB ' Policy . The author failed to state the reasons for the failure of the policy . I believe that the author is only trying to lay the blame at the doorstep of someone , if not he could have stated the reasons for the failure of the policy . This would no doubt have made the paragraph more understandable . The paragraph is short . I notice that the paragraph is somewhat segmented into three parts . The first doubles as the introductory part is where the policy was introduced , the aim of the policy comes next and finally the fate of the policy comes after this . There is no substantial transition between all these three parts . I found this information very interesting The No Child Left Behind act has caused schools to focus more on math and reading and disregard other subjects not important to the act ' this deals a heavy blow to the policy as this point of view portrayed the policy as a `not-well-thought ' one . Also , I would say that the paragraph is satisfactory...