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Running Head : Self Evaluation

Self Evaluation

Seema Mishra

India Self Evaluation 2

Abstract

Parallelism is quite talked about in the field of art of writing . You cannot completely

avoid or stay away from it but when you are writing essays or stories you will definitely

have to take care of that . Parallelism in essays or stories diminishes the impact of the

suspense in the story or plot . If you go on repeating words and phrases you will make the

essay boring and

it is quite possible that the reader will not even read it fully . You need to

make your essays interesting and it is entirely on you that how you present it to your

reader . There are some areas in the art of writing that you will need to learn but some part

will get developed with experience too . Self Evaluation 3

Self Evaluation

I was quite confident about my writing style and had the impression that I am competent

enough . But when more than one of my projects got remarks like `improve your writing

skill ' and `work hard on your writing style , I was shocked and was unable to look for my

faults . I had to discuss with one of my teachers who explained that I was using

parallelism in my writing style , which was quite boring and repetitive Then I noticed that

I was using some of the words quite a lot of time and they were even repeated quite a lot

of times in one single sentence . When I read my story I found that lots of characters were

created which either confused the reader or left them bewildered . I had to really work

hard so that I make my essays or stories interesting for the reader

While analyzing my early essays I found that most of the time I got diverted from the

main stream of discussion and wasted my pages on not so important issues . I now

understand it was because I need to draw on outline of my essay before finally writing it

I should deal the objectives and organize them according to the preferences required

while writing it . Repetitive use of words or phrases spoils the charm of writing and fails

to make story interesting . Even if the plot is good and organized , it needs to be appealing

so that the reader finds it out of the ordinary . I had the idea that repetitive use of words

and phrases add weight to your work but it is not in essays or stories It gives the

impression that the writer is using same words just because he is lacking original ideas

for the story . This gives a bad impression and cuts your marks eventually . Self Evaluation 4

I was always against plagiarism and had the idea that it is just copying word by word of

some other writer 's work . But even if you use some facts by changing few words with

their synonyms is also categorized under plagiarism . It...