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descriptive essay of my attic

ORGANIZATION

Mood - warm , homey , comforting

Vantage point - Sitting on the couch

Physical layout of the room - My living room is perhaps the most inviting room in my house

Black end table on the right

Water fountain

Front door on the same wall to the left

On wall to left of couch bar open to kitchen

Pictures

On wall in front of couch tv and entertainment center

TV

Home Theatre

Playstation 2

At right angle to couch love seat

Wicker end table on the end of

that

Ivy

Wicker coffee table to the right of couch

Stack of well read books

Feelings inspired by the room - The felings inspired by the room make it my favorite room in the house

Warmth

Love

Sense of home

Openings

My living room is perhaps the most inviting room in my house Coming home and relaxing in my living room is truly a bit of heaven on earth

My Living room , my haven , is my choice of places to recharge from the everyday grind

The comfort , sense of family , and peace I find in looking around my living room amazes me some days

Looking around my living room , I can feel the love and care that went into each thoughtful placement of furniture , picture , and odds and ends

Looking around the room I am overwhelmed by the sense of family , the sense of warmth , The unadulterated sense of love that flows from the room

First Draft

Looking around the room I am overwhelmed by the sense of family , the sense of warmth , the unadulterated sense of love that flows from the room . Sitting on the couch , I look to the left and see the black end table . I remember that we won the lighted waterfall that has it 's home there at Christmas during a game of white elephant . Moving my eyes up just a bit I see , on the very same wall this couch sits on , my front door , with the leopard print entry mat . Listening the to inviting sounds of my waterfall , I move my eyes over to the wall on my left , well partial wall . I see the closet that holds all of our winter coats and the more mundane vacuum cleaner . After the closet the wall open up into a bar that divides the kitchen and the living room . Placed along the top of the bar is a few of our family pictures and in between each of those sit our candles filling the room with the beautiful light scent of strawberry rhubarb . As I continue my sweep , I come to the wall directly across from and my heart warms as I see the corner leading into the hall way . There are marks along the wall there in varying heights with dates written out beside each one . A growth chart if you will , and again a sense of love and family pours through me . I come then to the shadow boxes hanging in a diagonal line flowing the right . Each contains...

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