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ARTICLE 1

This piece has been written with an astute combination of information and synthesis . It shows the write does have a substantial grasp of the idea being put forward in the article . The main issues are clearly elucidated to a reasonable extent . Although there are still a number of other parts of discourse that have not been incorporated , but have been left out possibly because of space and risk of extraneous materials . The author is however obviously bitter with the health system involving HMOs and its inherent challenges . He

is deeply unsatisfied with the current clients have to be treated because of the services under this system in expressing this view , he has used terms that are outrageous and they have marred the beautiful presentation that could made the argument for a change in this system possibly alive

ARTICLE 2

He has used the piece to express his unequivocal impression about the bias nature of reports in the media , especially when it concerns government . The art of essay writing is learnt by practice an d constant exposure to its attendant challenges . More importantly is the beauty of that art when applied to a d of knowledge . This author has been able to incorporate this to a reasonable extent in his writing on the His introduction is however not so sound as to be use for such a piece of work . It is better placed at the end indeed , it builds a bias that can make the appalling . The author needs to work on the use of tense construction . He also needs to know that sentence and paragraph coherence are important parts of beauty and better write-up

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