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UC Undergraduate Admissions(Personal statement)EDITING

`Tell us about a personal quality , talent , accomplishment , contribution or experience that is important to you . What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud , and how does it relate to the person you are

It has often been said that the true measure of a person can be seen through her deeds . I feel that I am no different in that I am a woman of action but more importantly a woman of compassion . Since I was young , I naturally learned the importance of sharing and helping from my parents . They

motivated me to consider the sharing and helping as the most basic privileges of my life . I was greatly motivated by the bibliography of Albert Schweitzer and Florence Nightingale . These role models have greatly influenced my character

Taking classical ballet classes since I was 3 years old until I became 17 years old , I have had many experiences and qualities that I am quite proud off . I have always been a well rounded individual . On top of my ballet classes , I went to school and performed very well in my academics . I have also learned how to accomplish these extra-curricular activities while still maintaining very good grades

My parents have always been community oriented their whole life and have devoted much of their time reaching out and helping other people in our community . Naturally , I learned how to use my ability to help the others who are in need and how to interact with them readily and satisfactorily...

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