Review

Review

The language of the named Two_artists-sam .doc ' is much easier than the rest of the two . And use of passive voice is also less in this . s have different referencing styles as well

Among the two s about rationalists one uses past tense like He stated ' in Monads and other uses present tense like Spinoza states .I feel the format of in text citations and references page is not according to the APA style . While in text citing only author and year are mentioned and rest of the complete details are given

in the references page while in your you have given full information under pictures

Only last name of the author is mentioned in in text citations not full name like (Jang , 2002 ) not (Jon Jang , 2002

Similarly in references page last name comes before first name

Hyperlinks should not be active when cited like http /www .jonjang .com not HYPERLINK "http /www .jonjang .com " http /www .jonjang .com

The correct format for referencing a web source is

Author , A . A Author , B . B (Date of publication . Title of document Retrieved month day , year (only if the text may potentially change over time , from http /Web address

Format of references must be hanging like

Author , A . A Author , B . B (Date of publication . Title of document Retrieved month day , year (only if the text may potentially change over time , from http /Web address

Include a page header in the upper right-hand of every page . To create a page header , type the first 2-3 words of the title of the , insert five spaces , and then give the page number

For pictures citation goes under them left-indented

Everything should be left indented but headings can be centered except for fourth level headings . Introduction and conclusion headings must be centered

Citations are placed before full stop not after

There are also some grammatical mistakes like works will be remained in conclusion of Two_artists-sam .doc

References must always be on a separate page

There is a difference in the referencing style of s . At some places you have placed in text citations before full stop and somewhere after it

In APA , author-year is mentioned while in two of the s you have used author-page number

There is widespread use of passive voice especially in Spinoza 's Substance Monism ' and monads . Try to reduce passive voice as much as possible...