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Women : Stronger then Before

It was a very good essay Brianna you were able to distinguish the roles of women from the past until the present time . It is true that women from the nineteenth century are hindered to talk or disobey their husband rules , they are not given a right to vote or even voice out their opinion , it is also a good point in your essay that the roles of women in the society are limited as well as their capacity to think they cannot go beyond the traditions of society

and also they cannot give opinions or speak what they want . It is also true that women should only be in their house and do all the household chores while men work women do the laundry , dishes , clean the house and cook for her husband when he comes home from work , women also should only be seen either at their house or in the church to pray . Women before in the nineteenth century are molded to be the perfect women ' in the society but of course as time passed by women were able to achieve the privileges as men have as pointed out in your essay , it was a very good point for it is true that women were able to slowly be a part of the society and their voices are heard instead of being outcast but in the end their opinions are given importance . Another good point in your essay is that women are given the chance to attend school for girls it is relevant for it opened a lot of doors for women to venture to different fields they want to specialize and it gives them a chance to explore their capabilities in a broader way . The over all content of your essay was really good , it tackles about women in the past until the present time it opens a lot of minds that women have undergo many difficulties before achieve their freedom and rights now , it tells us that as women we should feel very blessed and that give importance to the privileges given to us and that it should not be abuse or misuse by us . Women have the power to change and make the world a great place

References

Lee , K (1999 . Women in a Changing World . Time Magazine 12 (3 , 23-25...

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