Retrospective Essay

Also , I used epoch to describe the medieval period , when epoch connotes geologic time . I should have just used simple words and not try to use substitutes just to offer variety in my vocabulary . Also , my writing can improve if I define the terms I use . I could define certain terms like dignity , double-consciousness and beauty as I use them in my to clarify what I mean when I use those words , especially since they are abstract and subject to individual interpretations . Moreover , I reading my work after some time opened my

eyes to the varying degrees of vagueness present in them Consider these : Because it seems that according to Nussbaum , it is imagination even more than reason that fosters compassion , a right or a responsibility to closely look at and engage in the lives of unprivileged , could be the solution to the problem of discrimination in the caste system and Too much truth is only too much if it is not the real truth - too much brutality , lack of consciousness or compassion - that is what is too much . Even I am having a difficult time figuring out what I was trying to say . Of course , given the chance , I will write them differently : For Nussbaum , it seems that it is the imagination more than reason that fosters compassion - the right and responsibility to look closely and engage in the lives of the unprivileged . Perhaps then , it is the imagination that could help end the problem of discrimination not only in India , but wherever it exists . And : Exaggerated and selective truth is not truth . Too much brutality and lack of conscientiousness - that is the truth of our times . Next time I write a , I will make sure to make my sentences clear and well defined

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