Read an essay, answer the questions(no more than 3 sentences).Should be simple.

ESSAY REVIEW

The most successful or effective part I found about the essay is the of the ad about the Extra gum . While , the conclusion part of the essay needs improvement . Maybe the writer could show more of the relevance of the advertisement

The intended audiences identified in the beginning of the essay are people of the age 20-40 . Then the writer argued that it should be for everybody since most people like to chew gums . It is also said there that those people might be animal lovers

The paragraph that

is best developed and best focused is the one with the of how the ad looks like . On the other hand , the least developed and least focused paragraph is the relationship of the dog 's pictures to the Extra gum . These paragraphs can be improved by adding supporting details , emphasis or explanation

There are sentences that are weak and with grammatical error . Grammar and sentence construction need improvement . It is necessary to shorten each sentence to effectively convey the idea . It would be better to have one idea per sentence . The writer should also watch the subject-verb agreement . Be careful also with the adjective to be used in a sentence

The impression given by the of the ad is that it is something cute and attention catcher . Most probably , it is the same impression made by the ad itself . That is , to catch the attention of people and keep on reading the advertisement

The writer could still improve the s ' organization by starting with the most obvious detail up to the least obvious and least noticed element . In the essay , the writer was able to emphasize the elements that are most likely to catch the reader 's eye . However , the most important to the overall impression needs more emphasis and explanation . Like for example its relevance or edge to the other brand of chewing gums

The analysis is the longest but not the most developed part of the draft . The analysis was able to explain how the various aspects of the advertisement work together to create the appeal for the audience However , it needs more improvement and focus on each idea . The color of the image or text could also be noted . The writer could explain why the color is this or that , is it just for catching attention or does it has any relevance with the product being advertised . In the analysis , the relevance or importance of the objects , images or texts used can be made clearer . The writer can also add more argument about the advertisement

The writer of the draft employs terms from the poetic analysis which includes tone and diction . The tone can be seen in the essay that tells about the probable reaction of the reader or audience of the advertisement . The diction on the other hand is implied in the tag line or the logo of the advertisement It lasts . So you will too ' In the advertisement , the symbolisms significantly...