RESUME/LETTER EXERCISE

a . Pursuant to your ad , I am writing to apply for the position of junior accountant

Correct : This letter of application is in reference of a published ad by your company for the vacancy on junior accountant

b . I need all the information you have about methane-powered engines

Correct : I am respectfully requesting for a copy of pertinent latest data and information regarding the methane-powered engines , for your company is the leading expert of such technology

c . You idiots have sent me a faulty disk drive

Correct : I wish to inform

your good office that the disk drive you sent me is not working . I am requesting for an immediate replacement of the said items

d . It is imperative that you let me know of your decision by January 15

Correct : It would be highly appreciated if you will inform us on your decision by January 15

e . You are bound to be impressed by my credentials

Correct : do read my credentials and other professional information to prove myself as an asset for your company

f . I could do wonders for your company

Correct : As my educational and professional background states , I may be an asset for your company 's future growth

g . I humbly request your kind consideration of my application for the position of junior engineer

Correct : I am looking forward for your consideration on my application for the needed position

h . If you are looking for a winner , your search is over

Correct : I humbly believe that I am the person your company needs

I . You will find the following instructions easy enough for an ape to follow

Correct : The instructions are written and constructed in the way it would be most comfortable for you to follow

J . I am in hopes that you will call soon

Correct : I am looking forward for a call from you soon

k . I am impressed by the high salaries paid for this kind of work

Correct : I highly appreciate the compensation for this job...