Personal Statement Rewrite

Prompt 1

Hong Kong , my home town , is a well developed city . It is a potential financial place that many businessmen would like to invest in since most things can be found in this bustling city . This sparkling city is the place where I grown grew up , educated received education , and lived in since I was born . I studied pre-school , elementary school , and high school in Hong Kong where I got a lot of my wonderful memories memorizes in schools . Up till to now , I can recall those funny and happy scenes

p In comparing the education system in Hong Kong and in the U .S , I can see that the two are in Hong Kong is more intense where Hong Kong students always study under pressures and through books . Schools focus a lot on textbooks and examinations , which make students feel stressed in learning . However On the other hand , the education system in the U .S . is less intense Students have a lot of activities in between the academic years and students are more relaxed in studying . On the other hand Likewise there are more opportunities for students to be well-educated in the U .S . than in Hong Kong

In my senior year at high school , I started to consider my future . I started to think about my goals as I grown grew up and become mature . I thought about which what kind of ways methods will be the best for me to...