Peer Review

Writer 's Name_____________________________

Reviewer 's Name___________________________

1 . Reviewer question : What is the author 's thesis

The author 's thesis in this document revolves around taking the necessary steps and preparation prior to fulfilling or addressing a specific responsibility . This means that an individual must carefully plan and point out the relevant factors that contribute to the completion of a task

2 . Reviewer question : Is the thesis clearly stated ? If not , how would you help the writer restate it

After reviewing the document , it can be argued that the thesis

statement was presented at the beginning . It gave the readers and idea of what transpired in the case and what necessary steps the author chose to address the current issue . With these things present in the there are no changes need to be made either to change or restate the thesis statement

Writer question : List the changes made based on this feedback . Also list those suggestions that were offered but that you did not make , and explain why you did not make the suggestions

3 . Reviewer question : Does the essay 's body stick to the main If not , where does it digress , and how could the writer revise the to make it stay more on the main

Looking at the composition of the , it can be seen that the author did stick to the original thesis statement in the body . However it seems that the lacks transitions to make the readers understand where they are...