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English Illustration paragraph

What is the sentence -- A father plays an important role in the personality development of a person

What is the -- My Father

What is the main point -- Father is blessing of God

Example Used to Support the Main Point -- I have been blessed to have him not only as a dad , but also as a teacher , a leader and an example of how to be a responsible adult and loving parent

What detail (s ) is /are used to make the first example stronger and easier to understand ? In

the sentence the father is called as a blessing of God who is playing not only a role of a parent but also a teacher and a leader . Father has been pictured as an example of a responsible person and a loving parent

Instance of using coordination -- He was involved in every aspect of our lives from school to sports and even discipline

Two instances of using subordination - 1 ) Of course , as kids we did not like to answer for ourselves , but now as a parent , I understand and am grateful for the example he set . 2 ) Many of my successes as an adult - in my education , my career and as a wife and mother - I owe to my Dad and how he raised me

Conclusion Sentence - Fathers have a great influence in the life of children ...

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