The Day of the Locust

Peer Review Sheet : Narrate an Event

The writer 's name is :___________________________ My name is :____________________________

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1 . Read for a first impression . Note below one area in the essay that was particularly effective

The part that described how Faye Greener used her sexuality to get ahead was particularly effective . The incorporation of lines from the book was seamless , with the simple use of the

phrase with such passages as ' Attributing her attitude to the stereotype of Hollywood helped the point , and the last line was simple yet insightful

2 . Read Again to suggest improvements

A . Can you , as a reader , follow the of events or activities in the narrative ? Briefly , make a list of the events that occur in the essay The of events in the story was not evident at all in the essay as it was just a character analysis of Faye Greener . The of ideas within the essay and the transitions were somewhat awkward : first , a physical of Faye then , her use of sexuality her use of men , but inexplicably discussing her inhibitions and alleged insecurity how she wants to be onstage but how it might all be a cover up (which made no sense how she talks then abruptly , the conclusion

B . Make a list of the people in the story . Can you see them...