Essay Contest / In 100 words or less tell us why you should live free and fabulo

My life goes on and I feel its pace . It is as heady as our modern times make it but there is still a part of my soul that is not affected by commonness and commercialism which engulf our society . The part for which sense of financial assurance and safety means little and which aspires to more human values

In the same vein , for me the possibility to live free and fabulous for a year is not that much about saving . It is more about getting a chance to experience a period in

life that would be closer to my basic aspiration - to enjoy life as it is and not be too beset by worries about maintaining its decent level

I feel that something like this should happen with me sooner or later This is like a vacation time is needed between periods of hard work to maintain spirit . Similarly , I need such free and fabulous year to have more time for life`s basic pleasures - communication with people and enjoying pastime

My life goes on and I feel its pace . It is as heady as our times make it but there is still a part of my soul not affected by commercialism of our society . The part for which sense of financial assurance means little and which aspires to more human values

In the same vein , the possibility to live free and fabulous is not that much about saving . It is more about getting a chance to come closer to my basic aspiration - to enjoy life as it is and not be too beset by worries about maintaining its decent level

My life goes on and I feel its pace . It is as heady as our times make it but there is still a part of my soul not affected by commonness and commercialism of our society , part which aspires to more human values

In the same vein , the possibility to live free and fabulous is not that much about saving . It is more about getting a chance to enjoy life as it is and not be too beset by worries about maintaining its decent level This is like a vacation is needed between periods of hard work to maintain spirit

COMMENTARY

At page 1 I put "extended " version . This is for you to better understand my reasoning (I wrote essay as if it were me who participated ) and it serves as material for 100 words versions

At page 2 there is a 100 words version

At page 3 there is an alternative 100 words version with comparison to vacation . This could be considered "I deserve it " approach , although I think it is no so much "deserve " as "need " in a positive way

I really hope I`ve helped and wish you good luck

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