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This is an example for poorly written email . This is a mail from the college authorities about the instructions for filling up the examination application form

Dear Students

The following are the instructions which every student should comply with in to be able to take the test

This is to inform to all those who are intending to take examination in the coming season of exams which will be held in the month of March 2009

As the exam dates are announced to be held in the month of March , all

br the students should submit the application forms on or before 20th of February , 2009 . The one thing they should do first is to collect the application form the Examination Cell and submit it duly filling it Don 't you

There 's one more method of getting the application form . They can download it from the college website as well

The application form should be filled in with the original handwriting of the student . No electronic copies no typing

Paste the photo of yourself which should be very recent one . The examination fee of 100 should be paid along with the application form in time

Those who can 't do accordingly , will not be allowed to take the examination , that is a guarantee

THIS IS THE FINAL MESSAGE AS FAR AS THE AS THE EXAMS ARE CONCERNED . NO MAILS IN THIS REGARD

With best wishes

Rewritten mail

Dear Students

We would like to inform you that the last...